Ivytail's and Blizzardclaw's kits: (redone)

[{-Butler-}]

These are the kits bios:

Name: Icekit
Age: 1 moon
Rank: kit
Clan: breezeclan
Gender: tom
Family: Blizzardclaw, Ivytail, Mosskit, Moosekit, Bearkit.
Looks: Icekit is a white. He is a normal sized kit.
Personality: Shy and quietess of the tom kits. That would be 2nd quiestess of the family.
Played by: butler

Name: Mosskit
Age: 1 moon
Rank: kit
Clan: breezeclan
Gender: she-cat
Family: Blizzardclaw, Ivytail, Icekit, Moosekit, Bearkit.
Looks: Mosskit is all white. But she does have brown paws and ears.
Personaltiy: Shyest of the litter.
Played by: jinx

Name: Moosekit
Age: 1 moon
Rank: kit
Clan: breezeclan
Gender: tom
Family: Blizzardclaw, Ivytail, Icekit, Mosskit, Bearkit.
Looks: Moosekit is all brown with white paws and ears. The opposite of Mosskit.
Personaltiy: Outgoing but mellow. Easigoing.
Played by: jinx

Name: Bearkit
Age: 1 moon
rank: kit
Clan: breezeclan
Gender: tom
Family: Blizzardclaw, Ivytail, Icekit, Mosskit, Moosekit.
Looks: Bearkit is all dark brown. He is the biggest of the 4.
Personaltiy: Bravest of the litter.
Played by: jinx

[Snowstorm]

mm the bios are a bit short. Not even a sentence.. Please modify it and make it a bit longer.

[{-Butler-}]

Is that better?

[Snowstorm]

Well, its better, but still a bit short, Accepted, next time maybe to make description longer, you can say whaqt colour eyes they have.

[{-Butler-}]

okay!